Thursday, October 15, 2009

C&C outline

Compare and contrast outline
Shopping online and traditional shopping
Nowadays, online shopping is a novel way to buy stuff, which is very different from traditional shopping in several aspects, including price, convenience and choices.

1st paragraph: price
Shopping online is always cheaper than traditional shopping.
1. Buying goods online is always tax-free.
Shopping in the mall, we have to pay nearly 10% taxes.
2. The competition among the online shops is much heavily, so the store owners offer us the goods at the lower price.
Sometimes big malls monopolizes in one place, so the price will keep high.
3. When we buy goods online, the store owners will pay the shipping fee.
If we go shopping in the mall, we need to spend much more money on transportation of taking bus or driving there.

2nd paragraph: convenience
Shopping online is much more convenient than traditional shopping.
1. We can sit in front of computer without going out but buy everything produced all around world.
We have to spend lots of time to search a good mall and how to arrive there. And we have to drive car or take bus to go there.
2. We can compare the goods online easily. We can enter the word that we want to buy on the website, and the list of all the goods at different prices will appear.
In the mall, we have to go to different shops to choose which one is better.
3. Buying goods online, we have to wait for several days until the goods mail to our home.
Shopping in the mall, we can use it as soon as we buy.

3rd paragraph
Shopping online offers much more choices.
1. Internet transfer information much more quickly.
2. Shopping online, we can take a look in thousands of online shops so that we can make good choice.
But in the mall, we only can search the goods in much less shops.
3. We have to image how we will look like when we turn the clothes on when we shopping online.
In the mall, we can fit on the clothing to compare which one is better.

Conclusion:
Shopping online enables us buy goods at lower price, offer us the more convenient way to shopping and provide more choices, which are totally different from traditional shopping and also benefits us a lot.

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